Hi gang! It's been a while, and lots has happened! Writing-wise, there were two especially cool things in April and May.
The first is, Hubby and I joined a local writer's group on Facebook, Treasure Valley Writers. It wasn't very active at first. But then one member asked if others in Nampa wanted to meet up *in person*. Hubby and I figured it was worth a try. And another friend, also writing a fantasy novel, said she'd go too. The four of us met up in late March, and hit it off well enough to schedule another meeting. We've met each month since and added three people We're up to seven now!
I think we're meshing well, approaching things with open minds, exchanging experiences and hoping to learn from each other. We all write different genres, but seem to have similar views on writing craft. During April we exchanged chapters (under 5k words) for others to comment on *as readers*, and at the May meeting we discussed three excerpts. I was wary, but it's been ok. Everyone tried to be honest but tactful. No one is trying to push things on the others. Each person who read my excerpt had different things to say. Good reader insights, and suggestions about stuff I'd overlooked.
I think mostly we're all super excited to talk to other writers! And nerd out about writing, world-building, POV, genre tropes, etc. A lot of my friends aren't interested in discussing the finer points of third-person close vs third-person omniscient. And who can blame them really. ;-)
In June the three people whose excerpts haven't been discussed yet will have their chance. We'll also be discussing how and when to put in physical description of the main POV character, and "Interiority". I'm hoping to find a page in the novel I'm currently reading with good examples of POV character description seamlessly included in the narrative. That "she looked in the mirror" cliche is frowned upon.
The second cool thing was our trip to Norway in May! Hubby and I started planning it late last year. We had everything booked to go in 2020, and then, well, the world changed. The trip we worked out for 2025 was different, but for good reasons. In 2022 we went to Scotland with another couple and found ourselves driving a lot more than we preferred. We only stayed at one location for more than one night. And as *the driver*, I didn't have the same experience as everyone else. So for Norway we consciously chose shorter distances between locations, and stayed two or more nights at all but one of them. A far more relaxing trip. Hubby ended up doing all the driving this time.
It was good to see and experience what it's like there. One thing is how tilted the landscape is along the fjords, and how it affects the way people live. Roads along the shores of the fjords are generally close to sea level. There are older roads that switch-back over high hills, but the newer roads just tunnel through the same hill.
You'd often pass a wide spot in the road with a gravel lane going up, or down, to a house or farm. The person's car would be parked at road level. The house might be uphill from that, and if it was a farm, the farm buildings would be up further still. Every time you left your house you'd be walking up or down a hill. The flatter areas along the fjords have mostly been covered by towns. Further inland, away from the coastal fjord area, there's more level land. Still mountainous, but the river valleys between are wider.
The mountains around fjords rise directly from the sea floor. Some are as tall as say, the Sierra Nevadas, but much of that height is underwater. Norway's average altitude is around 1,500 feet. The highest mountain in Norway is 8,100 feet.
One good thing about less altitude is there's more oxygen to breathe when hiking. We did a guided hike up to Jostedal glacier. The glacier's highest point is 6,621 feet above sea level. Many glaciers in North America are 2,000 feet higher than that, or more. The highest point of the Athabasca glacier in Canada is 8,900 feet, and the mountains around it are higher still. Whereas a lot of the glaciers in Norway are near the tops of the mountains around them. As a reference, Hubby and I live at about 2,400 feet. The place we go xc-skiing, Bear Basin, is 5,280 feet. So for me, 6,000 feet is just beginning to get into "feeling the altitude" territory. This hike didn't take us that high.The biggest visual difference was Norway's higher latitudes, from 57 - 81 degrees north, which puts a lot of the mountains above the tree line. The cold rocky alpine zone I'm used to seeing at over 8,000 feet (based on my experience in the Sierras) occurs at a much lower altitude.
Water was everywhere, from tiny streams to huge waterfalls, falling down into the fjord. Even farmers on a hillside have many streams flowing through their property, including multiple waterfalls. And in older times you might live close to your neighbor, but they're across the water. So a boat was necessary. But those people on the other side of a mountain? You might never meet them in your entire life.There are a lot of trees everywhere, of all kinds. Wood and rough stone were the primary building materials until people could afford cut stone, brick and cement. Wood was used for many things. Furniture, eating and drinking implements, buildings, churches, farm equipment, wagons, sleighs, tools, boats, musical instruments. Soooo much wood. And decorating it with carving was common. This sleigh is in an old barn at the Voss folk museum. It's beautiful - reminds me of a dragon!
I might not have thought about most of this if I hadn't visited. Depending on how closely I want my fantasy world to resemble Norway, it might make a difference in descriptions of farming, siting of villages, ease of travel, buildings and other things people make for themselves, the uses of water. It may be worth considering who gets the flatter areas. A flat area where a river joins a fjord would be prime land. Maybe only a lucky few were able to claim a flat area, and everyone else had to use the side of a hill. And communication between remote villages could be difficult if there's no water-routes. So how does a government communicate to all of its people? Some of that might find its way into the novel, but it will certainly inform my world-building.
The trip was educational from a writing point of view. But also we had a great time, saw lots of wonderful places, met some nice people, and learned a lot.